04/05/21-
In this session, we spoke about the movement video I had created. Of course, this was just a draft to present the footage I had filmed to portray identity. We discussed the next steps of my film- whether I am going to include the movement in that same way, whether I want to layer it over the top (of the interviews) or just have it playing by itself.
We spoke about Akram Khan exploring similar ideas even as an "established choreographer"- important that migration and identity is relevant.
19/05/21-
In this session, we focused on my written document with Ali answering any final questions I had.
Questions included:
- Word count
- Formatting
- Editing the document
- Submissions
- We spoke about cutting/ editing so that my document is more succinct
Feedback for written
- Think about moving the hypothesis, make links throughout the essay
- Cut out any repetition
- Check for grammar, spelling etc
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